Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 26 November 2018

SLJ paying it forward

In the 1930's i will give them a special treat like  treats. If they need like water or cars and tv + WIFI and much more i would go time travail back in time and give them all the special things in the world just for an old family.
and there treat is going to a very old family. i would like to show some respect when i walk in to there house.Write now i would be imaging my self and a friend going back in time and giving a treat to a really old family that really needed it and really

Friday, 23 November 2018

Egg+Coke+Milk+Water

sEgg+Coke+Milk+Water

Today  Ruma 4 was doing an  experiment on eggs and the mixture of milk and coke and water so we poured that in one by one it dissolve into a cup tea color and it looks yak   but its ok but in 24 hours we are going to check on it and see what happens i think the egg is going to rot and the shell might  come off but it didn’t so that means milk ,coke,coke zero and water that means if you leave means milk ,coke,coke zero and water in your mouth for it will just go a little bit yellow.as we were doing and experiment on coke your teeth will go a dark shade.next thing we investigated the  effect of coke on enamel.(enamel is a thin layer that's on your tooth
)is because  we are learning about healthy.

Second thing we did was we grab the beaker and then we took the egg out and  of the beaker and use a toothbrush with a little bit of toothpaste and bushed it in a circular way like you would if you were brushing your own teeth that why you don’t want to drink coke.if you leave coke in your mouth your teeth will look like bark and moldy .coke is bad us humas not coke has a nice tasted but at the same time it’s bad

Drawing Conclusions

 So  the things that are good for our teeth is water,milk and much more.The thing that are bad for your teeth are coke coke zero and fizzy fizzles can erode your teeth and making your teeth a dark shade and making your breath bad  and You might lose your teeth and you don’t want that to happen. GOOD BYE

Monday, 5 November 2018

Germs

What is Bacteria?

Do you know what Bacteria is? well if you don’t know let us tell you.

Bacteria are these little members of a large group of unicellular microorganisms. Back in the day doctors wouldn’t wash there hands so what happened was that the doctors would touch a dead human, then a healthy human. A week later the healthy human would die, but then this man discovered that if you wash hand it will get all that Bacteria off of the dead person. Not much people would die but everybody thought it was  a lie so they put him in box/cage where he would die. Then years later a person was like ohh i think that scientist was right so what they did was after the doctor finishing with a dead body then he washed his hand then he touch another human but one week later he didn’t die Then everybody felt sorry that they killed the man that discovered  Bacteria.

How does bacteria affect your daily life?
Bacteria affects your life everyday because bacteria is in the air , ground and mostly everywhere. Also, bacteria creates mould and fungus and much more . If you catch bacteria you could either get very sick or get infections or ever die from bad bacteria . But there is good bacteria too, good bacteria comes from Yogurt , Kefir , Sauerkraut ,Tempeh and Milk.

How do scientist discover things?
 So how do scientist find about there thing so what they                                                                                                             
So they read about what they are researching about and then go find what they're reaching about and then  they go find where it is in the world and go to get it for testing just incase its bad for the human race.so scientist  discover things? By testing things and by remembering from the past.Also they test chemicals and  making connection with different things In the eighteenth century, smallpox killed about 60 million people every year . by the middle of the twentieth century.

WALT - about germs how they spread and affect our day to day
WALT introduction to conclusion

Friday, 31 August 2018

Descriptive writing

At planet Fortnite there is beautiful place because the  sun set is awesome the Tilted tower has there's wonderful apartments with food. When you go to Snobby shores there are these house with the beach right below then when the sun comes down they have  roasted marshmallows.Then when ninja jumps on the game it's about to be game time he wins all the time then he puts it on twitch.He has all the skins his favourite is the skull trooper ninja has the yellow bandanna he  only s where's it when he wins if he doesn't win he will rage but let's go back to talking about fortnite. There's are the guns Hand Cannon there are six ASSAULT RIFLE three Shotgun one mini gun three pistil and four snipers the best one is the gold heavy does 395.5 to the head rocket langers the one that does the most is  normal rocket langers because  it does 121 to the head thats the gun.My first thing is fortnite is a awesome game that means if you went to the planet that would be 100 x the amount of fun you would happy.But the best thing about fortnite is the water because the water has this beautiful thing on it thing thats on is that it has crystal blue and the way goes down a makes a splash

WALT-Recraft our writing to add more descriptive language

Friday, 24 August 2018

Mars writing

 Introduction 
I think we should go mars because it is a beautiful planet but and the same time it is a dangerous option because it has no oxygen, no food or water.  We could not survive without all of those things.   

For
I firmly believe that we should go Mars because Earth is overpopulated.The world has over 7.6 billion people so that means that there will not be enough food  and it could cause disease and kill more people. If we moved to Mars we could start a colony and start a new world. 

Against 
If we go to Mars on the north side of Mars there is a active volcano and there is a sand storm that could last  forever. The sandstorm could break down  your infrastructure , and then co2 could go into infrastructure that means if you went to mars there is a 50/ 50 chance of Dying. If you wanted to go back to Earth  the journey 
Would be 8 months.

WALT- Use emotive language,

Friday, 3 August 2018

Squid Dissection

Squid Dissection

Equipment

First thing you will need for the scientist experiment  you will need a pair of shape scissors,next thing you will need is a pair of scientific tongs,then you will need a red tray to hold the squid and you will need some paper so the ink won’t squirt on your T shirt and you will need some squid and safety goggles.




Beak removal
So how to remove a squid's beak. First you will have to turn the squid upside down then grab your pair of tongs and take it of the squid's body. The beak looks sharp and pointy and plastic. 


Brain Removal
Put the squid back upside down and then you have got to squeeze the brain  out like a pimple then take the brain out of the little hole. When you pull the brain out it comes out with a nerve. 


Pen Removal  
To get the pen you will need to go to the back of the 
squid .To tell if its the back of the squid it will be the darker side then you will need to cut to the top of the squid caecum then you will feel the plastic bit and then you have to  hold the  mantle to pull it out.

WALT Organise our ideas into paragraphs


Friday, 23 September 2016

writing

I was learning about similes. An example is as ugly as a frog.