Friday 31 August 2018

Descriptive writing

At planet Fortnite there is beautiful place because the  sun set is awesome the Tilted tower has there's wonderful apartments with food. When you go to Snobby shores there are these house with the beach right below then when the sun comes down they have  roasted marshmallows.Then when ninja jumps on the game it's about to be game time he wins all the time then he puts it on twitch.He has all the skins his favourite is the skull trooper ninja has the yellow bandanna he  only s where's it when he wins if he doesn't win he will rage but let's go back to talking about fortnite. There's are the guns Hand Cannon there are six ASSAULT RIFLE three Shotgun one mini gun three pistil and four snipers the best one is the gold heavy does 395.5 to the head rocket langers the one that does the most is  normal rocket langers because  it does 121 to the head thats the gun.My first thing is fortnite is a awesome game that means if you went to the planet that would be 100 x the amount of fun you would happy.But the best thing about fortnite is the water because the water has this beautiful thing on it thing thats on is that it has crystal blue and the way goes down a makes a splash

WALT-Recraft our writing to add more descriptive language

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    1. Kia ora Recaro I really like How you did your descriptive writing It made me think of Fortnite and all the guns that you did and that you used some characters on fortnite to, Have you thought about doing something else instead of fortnite and do something about things you are interested in? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is here
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