I felt something dancing on me it was green and yellow. It was coming of the trees and i heard a crunch. It sounded like a dried up leaf it was all over me when i laid under a tree. When i laid down i heard a louder crunch it made me itchy.the crunch was making my ears hurt.
WALT- Use adjectives, verbs
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