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Mars writing

 Introduction 

I think we should go mars because it is a beautiful planet but and the same time it is a dangerous option because it has no oxygen, no food or water.  We could not survive without all of those things.   

For

I firmly believe that we should go Mars because Earth is overpopulated.The world has over 7.6 billion people so that means that there will not be enough food  and it could cause disease and kill more people. If we moved to Mars we could start a colony and start a new world. 

Against 

If we go to Mars on the north side of Mars there is a active volcano and there is a sand storm that could last  forever. The sandstorm could break down  your infrastructure , and then co2 could go into infrastructure that means if you went to mars there is a 50/ 50 chance of Dying. If you wanted to go back to Earth  the journey 

Would be 8 months.

WALT- Use emotive language,